Writing the sample chapter. Three weeks has become two weeks. The chapter is about a woman named Gloria — a fictional composite of real military wives I've interviewed — who cooks through her husband's deployment to Iraq with two children, no money, and a kitchen smaller than mine.
Except she's not fictional. She's Mom. She's me. She's every woman who's stood at a stove during a deployment and refused to let the absence win.
The chapter alternates between Gloria's story and recipes — each scene paired with the meal she makes that night. The deployment announcement: chicken soup. The first night alone: crockpot chicken. The deployment birthday: a cake by hand, no mixer. The homecoming: pot roast.
The recipes ARE the story. The food IS the narrative. Just like the first book. But bigger. More women. More kitchens. More odds to cook against.
Mom has been extraordinary. Every night at 7 PM, she tells me stories: the deployment to Iraq in 2003 (I was five; I barely remember). The PCS to Bremerton (I was eight; I remember the rain). The night she made Thanksgiving alone in Pearl Harbor (I was seven; I remember the turkey). Each story is a recipe. Each recipe is a scene.
'Tell me about the worst night,' I asked on Wednesday.
'The worst night was when your father's unit was hit by the IED. 2009. I got the call. I didn't know if he was alive. I hung up the phone and I went to the kitchen and I made dinner. Chicken and rice casserole. Because the girls needed to eat and I couldn't fall apart in front of you.'
She made the casserole. While not knowing if Dad was alive. She made the casserole because Megan and I needed dinner and dinner was the one thing she could control.
I wrote that into the chapter. The casserole during the IED call. The most powerful food scene I've ever written.
Hazel has started pulling herself up on furniture. Eight months old and standing. Caleb watches and says, 'Hazel is STANDING! Like a PERSON!' She IS a person, Caleb. She's been a person the whole time.
Made the crockpot chicken tonight. The deployment recipe. The survival recipe. The recipe that's now in two books — the published one and the one being written.
Two weeks. The chapter is coming together. Mom's stories are the foundation.
The kitchen holds everything. Even the worst night.
The crockpot chicken is in the book — both books now — but the recipe I keep coming back to on the hardest writing nights is this brisket. You seal it in a bag, you put it in the oven, and you walk away. It doesn’t need you to stand over it. It doesn’t need stirring or checking or worry. It just cooks, low and slow, while you do what you have to do — write the chapter, hold the baby, call your mother at seven and ask her to tell you about the worst night. When the timer goes off, it’s done. Tender and falling apart, the way all of us are by the end of the day, except the brisket makes it look intentional.
Brisket in a Bag
Prep Time: 15 minutes | Cook Time: 3 hours 30 minutes | Total Time: 3 hours 45 minutes | Servings: 8
Ingredients
- 1 beef brisket (3 to 4 pounds), trimmed
- 1 tablespoon chili powder
- 1 teaspoon garlic powder
- 1 teaspoon onion powder
- 1 teaspoon smoked paprika
- 1/2 teaspoon black pepper
- 1 teaspoon salt
- 1 large oven roasting bag
- 1 tablespoon all-purpose flour
- 1 cup beef broth
- 1 large onion, sliced into rings
- 3 cloves garlic, minced
- 2 tablespoons Worcestershire sauce
- 2 tablespoons tomato paste
Instructions
- Preheat the oven. Set oven to 325°F.
- Season the brisket. Combine chili powder, garlic powder, onion powder, smoked paprika, salt, and black pepper in a small bowl. Rub the mixture evenly over the entire brisket.
- Prepare the bag. Add the flour to the oven roasting bag and shake to coat the inside. Place the bag in a large roasting pan.
- Build the braising liquid. Whisk together the beef broth, Worcestershire sauce, and tomato paste. Pour into the bag.
- Assemble. Scatter the onion rings and minced garlic inside the bag. Place the seasoned brisket on top, fat side up. Seal the bag and cut 4 to 6 small slits in the top for steam to escape.
- Roast low and slow. Cook for 3 to 3-1/2 hours, until the brisket is fork-tender and pulls apart easily.
- Rest and slice. Remove the brisket from the bag carefully and let it rest on a cutting board for 10 minutes. Slice against the grain. Spoon the pan juices and onions over the sliced meat before serving.
Nutrition (per serving)
Calories: 340 | Protein: 38g | Fat: 16g | Carbs: 5g | Fiber: 1g | Sodium: 520mg
About the cook who shared this
Rachel Abernathy
Week 335 of Rachel’s 30-year story
· San Diego, California
Rachel is a twenty-eight-year-old Marine wife and mom of two who has moved five times in six years and learned to cook a Thanksgiving dinner with half her cookware still in boxes. She married young, survived postpartum depression, and feeds her family of four on a junior Marine's salary with a freezer full of pre-made meals and a crockpot that has never let her down. She writes for the military spouses who are cooking dinner alone in base housing and wondering if they're enough. You are.